{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"599457","dateCreated":"1179809201","smartDate":"May 21, 2007","userCreated":{"username":"bluegina","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/bluegina","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/ithslibrary.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/599457"},"dateDigested":1532129110,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"organizing your ideas","description":"Francis, <br \/>\nThe way you separated your ideas into positive and negative issues is really interesting. When you went on to identify what you'd put in each paragraph, you lost sight of some of that organization. I think your paper will be much stronger if you hold onto the positive\/negative scheme.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nDon't worry about the paragraphs yet. That will become easier to figure out as you write more. I'd suggest starting with the parts that are most interesting to you, then filling in the information that's needed to explain and back up your ideas. Your focus on how cellphones have affected social life and family relations is fascinating. Go for it!<br \/>\n<br \/>\nHere's something to think about: why did your friend who talks on the phone a lot come to mind when we did that writing activity today? What's annoying about people who are on the phone all the time? How has that habit changed how we deal with each other in social settings?<br \/>\n<br \/>\nI'm looking forward to reading what you come up with.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nSincerely,<br \/>\nMs. Moss","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}